My Special Person - Olivia - Draft 1

Compliments and Wishes Please
Below is a snippet from our “Special Person” writing.
We are learning to describe in detail aspects of our person.

Please support our learning by providing feedback in the form of two compliments and one wish. This exemplar might be helpful.

My special person is my mum tinah. She looks like a brown curly short haired, lovely blue eyed, normal nosed person. She has freckles dotted on her face and arms and legs. She ushally wears make up earings and necklaces but not in her sleep. She has short stumpy eyelashes and wrinkles around her eyes and cheecks.