Below is Zavier' s 'Special Person' writing.
We are learning to describe in detail.
This means including deeper features such as:
- personal voice
- ideas that are important to the story
- a clear structure
- exciting vocabulary
Please support our learning by providing feedback in the form of compliments and wishes. This exemplar might be helpful .
My Special Person
My special person is my great grandfather Reggie.
Reggie is funny caring loving and brainy.
He has short hair like grass it is grey like a shield.
He has ginger glasses and old fashion clothes from England.
He never drank beer.
Reggie always believed in me. He was my best friend.
He loved sweets. He loved to drink cups of tea.
His favourite car was a Rolls Royce. He always said be careful there are a lot of woman drivers.
Reggie is the most special person in the world to me because he loves me.
