My Special Person - Author - Zavier

 Below is Zavier' s 'Special Person' writing. 

We are learning to describe in detail. 

This means including deeper features such as:

• personal voice
• ideas that are important to the story
• a clear structure
• exciting vocabulary

Please support our learning by providing feedback in the form of compliments and wishes.  This exemplar might be helpful .

My Special Person

My special person is my great grandfather Reggie. 

Reggie is funny caring loving and brainy.

He has short hair like grass it is grey like a shield. 

He has ginger glasses and old fashion clothes from England. 

He never drank beer. 

Reggie always believed in me. He was my best friend. 

He loved sweets. He loved to drink cups of tea. 

His favourite car was a Rolls Royce. He always said be careful there are a lot of woman drivers.

Reggie is the most special person in the world to me because he loves  me.    

My Special Person - Author - Damian

Below is Damian's 'Special Person' writing.

We are learning to describe in detail. 

This means including deeper features such as:

• personal voice
• ideas that are important to the story
• a clear structure
• exciting vocabulary

Please support our learning by providing feedback in the form of compliments and wishes.  

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My special person Nana

My special person is my Nana because she’s funny always happy when we go over to her house and a quilt making machine.

She’s got short and grey hair that sticks up a bit she’s got fiery red glasses a cheerful spirit and she’s shorter than my 11

Year old brother who’s about 10-15 cm taller than me my Nana’s an awesome Nana because she’s always happy and cheers me up when I’m feeling down. I remember when I saw all her quilts in a picture “whoa” I said “how long does it take for you to do them” I say “about 6 months each she says” “that’s a long time” I say.

I always love going to my Nana’s because I’ve only being there 2 or 3 times and there’s always something new I love her and she loves me But most of all is that I love her and she loves me.

My Special Person - Author - Matt

Below is Matt 's 'Special Person' writing.

We are learning to describe in detail. 
This means including deeper features such as:

• personal voice
• ideas that are important to the story
• a clear structure
• exciting vocabulary

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My Special Person 

My special person is my youngest brother Adam. He’s special because he makes me laugh and smile.

Adam is full of mischief and mayhem.  He looks so cute with his brown eyes and brown hair.  He looked really adorable at my Aunty’s wedding.  He was the pageboy.

When we play soccer he jumps around like a kangaroo saving the shots on goal.  He is my youngest brother and that’s a reason he’s special as well as lots of other reasons.

He is the best brother ever and I love him a lot and that’s what makes him special.

 By Matthew

My Special Person - Author = Maringi

Below is Maringi's 'Special Person' writing.

We are learning to describe in detail. 
This means including deeper features such as:

• personal voice
• ideas that are important to the story
• a clear structure
• exciting vocabulary

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My Nanny Parihaka!
My special person is my Nanny Parihaka. She’s loving, nice, caring, sharing and helpful.
My Nanny has grey hair tied up in a bun, big blue eyes the colour of the sea,  old fashioned clothes blue, green, red, aqua and multi colours only the colours  I said she wouldn’t wear anything else.

I wish you had met her she was the best nanny I knew.
She was helpful by cooking and when she came around she would help me until I’m finished.
She always said when I come for a visit “where’s my mokopuna”? What I would do is say “rrraaahhh” and we would laugh together.
The worst thing is that she has past away though but I will remember her and that’s what matters.

One of my memories is when we went for a drive she sat by me for about 2-4 hours there to my cousins and back home telling jokes that we know. The most favourite was what’s black and white black and white black and white? A penguin rolling down the hill.
The most important thing is that she will be there all the way, right now she will be looking down at me.
That’s why nanny parihaka is so special to me. I hope you have a special person too.
By Maringi
 

My Special Person

Below is Lucy's “Special Person” writing.
We are learning to describe in detail. 
This means including deeper features such as:

• personal voice
• ideas that are important to the story
• a clear structure
• exciting vocabulary

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My special person is my auntie her name is Sarah but I call her Auntie Sarah. She is warm, engaging,   loving, caring and amazing.

Auntie Sarah has amazing greeny bluey glowing eyes and her smile seems as big as 10 tennis balls. She has warm silky skin and silky brown hair. Her voice is calm and encouraging. She smells like a flower that has just bloomed. She adores perky nannas I remember when we ate 20 perky nannas and we kept it a secret because they were meant for after dinner and its still kept a secret and it always will be. She enjoys shopping, sunbathing, relaxing and fun I love her so much and she does to.

I love my Auntie Sarah she is really special to me and I love it when she comes to New Zealand. 
        

My Special Person - Olivia - Draft 1

Compliments and Wishes Please
Below is a snippet from our “Special Person” writing.
We are learning to describe in detail aspects of our person.

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My special person is my mum tinah. She looks like a brown curly short haired, lovely blue eyed, normal nosed person. She has freckles dotted on her face and arms and legs. She ushally wears make up earings and necklaces but not in her sleep. She has short stumpy eyelashes and wrinkles around her eyes and cheecks.

My Special Person - Charlotte - Draft 1

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Below is a snippet from our “Special Person” writing.
We are learning to describe in detail aspects of our person.

Please support our learning by providing feedback in the form of two compliments and one wish. This exemplar might be helpful.

My mum Anna has brown wavy hair like a brown bear. Her eyes twinkle like brown stars.
Her hair is past her shoulders but she has dyed her hair red and she has freckles dotted on her face.

My Special Person - Maringi - Draft 1

Compliments and Wishes Please
Below is a snippet from our “Special Person” writing.
We are learning to describe in detail aspects of our person.

Please support our learning by providing feedback in the form of two compliments and one wish. This exemplar might be helpful.
Draft 1
My NaNN has gray hair tide up in a bun as well as Big Blue eyes the couler of the sea Plus old fashion cloths blue, green, red and gray She wouldint wear anything ales.