My Special Person - Author - Matt

Below is Matt 's 'Special Person' writing.

We are learning to describe in detail. 
This means including deeper features such as:

• personal voice
• ideas that are important to the story
• a clear structure
• exciting vocabulary

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My Special Person 

My special person is my youngest brother Adam. He’s special because he makes me laugh and smile.

Adam is full of mischief and mayhem.  He looks so cute with his brown eyes and brown hair.  He looked really adorable at my Aunty’s wedding.  He was the pageboy.

When we play soccer he jumps around like a kangaroo saving the shots on goal.  He is my youngest brother and that’s a reason he’s special as well as lots of other reasons.

He is the best brother ever and I love him a lot and that’s what makes him special.

 By Matthew